Saturday, November 20, 2021

Monday Night, Late

So, already, here's a seasonal poem, the result of my poetry-writing group's recent poetry experiment assignment--to write a poem inspired in some way by parking lots, or a parking lot. The experiment came from Erica Goss's Vibrant Words: Ideas and Inspirations for Poets; Goss has a history of poetic parking lot inspiration.

So here's my poem experiment, entitled "Monday Night, Late."
 
Monday night, late,
Thanksgiving week,
In the parking lot farthest
From the museum--
 
One car, not empty,
Parked just beyond
The chill pool of white light
Cast by a single streetlamp,
Naked sentinel posted
At the the summit of the hill
Rising steeply from the lot's edge.
 
On the hill, two roads diverge,
Both leading to architects' dreams
Set deep in wooded lots
That can't conceal them
Once November's stripped the trees
And sent their leaves
On a forced march
To the barren lot below.

There is no silence in November.
Bullied by the wind,
The oak leaves skitter rustling
Across the lot in chorus line-like waves,
Each briefly obliterating
The low hum of ignored talk radio
And the friends' easy banter
Muffled already by
The heater fan's dull shush.
 
Now and then, the red-lit tip
Of a cigarette or joint
Slides out above the top edge
Of the driver's window--
And then another line of leaf dancers
Launches out across the empty stage.
Giving it their urgent, noisy all.

5 comments:

  1. So easy to imagine this piece of real estate from your words. Thank you for sharing it.

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    1. And thank you for reading and responding, Cuzzie 2A.

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  2. This is great, Joan. You exited it perfectly. Love those marching and dancing leaves! No "purple patches" in this poem! (not that you ever had any in your other poems either!)

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    1. So glad you think so, N! I’m glad I don’t have you seeing purple, since we both know about purple problems!

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